Comments on: Jill’s Story: An Online Zombie Story

By: Jack

Jack — Wed, 08 Sep 2010 02:29:29 +0000

So, can you review my blog?

By: Jack

Jack — Sun, 29 Aug 2010 19:57:33 +0000

Why, thank you.My username has a link to the blog. Be gentle.

By: Ursula

Ursula — Sun, 29 Aug 2010 19:54:05 +0000

Hi Jack,

You can just ask myself or any of the regulars who write the articles & we would gladly write a review.

Ursula

By: Jack

Jack — Sun, 29 Aug 2010 17:37:28 +0000

If I were to try and promote my ongoing zombie blog on this site like these people, how would I go about doing that?

By: Lisa

Lisa — Sun, 16 May 2010 01:35:15 +0000

Yeah they do exist in the same world but basically different parts of the world. My hope is to someday publish all of them like a collection. Kind of like world war Z. Revising Jill’s right now so I will have a better version soon.

By: danation

danation — Sat, 15 May 2010 19:42:58 +0000

Hey Lisa, I want you to know that my judgement on the grammar is with love. I truly enjoyed the story, and though I was a little disappointed with the ending, I could see the reason in it.
Do your other stories exist in the same world as this one? Because a multi-character story could be a really fun read, especially if they somehow interact. That being said, keep up the good work; and thanks for putting your stories out there for us to enjoy.

By: Lisa

Lisa — Fri, 14 May 2010 04:10:33 +0000

I am not sure if chapter 10 is the end. I write my books like movies in my head. Hence the bad grammar. It could go on and I want it to go on but I am working on another story that is about another character and I find I cannot write about two different characters at one time.

By: Ursula

Ursula — Thu, 13 May 2010 04:59:00 +0000

I just finished reading an email from her saying she was revising it on 5/12/10.

I haven’t finished it yet because I had two family members in the hospital this week. Luckily, it was not due to zombie bites. ;)

By: danation

danation — Wed, 12 May 2010 21:37:24 +0000

So AstraDaemon, since you know Lisa I gotta ask… is Chapter 10 the end? If it is, I am a little disappointed.

By: danation

danation — Mon, 10 May 2010 20:52:38 +0000

Glad to hear that. I looked at a few more of the posts she had in there and they were a little easier to follow. My only other issues with it was that it felt like she was torn between making it a journal or a first person narrative and she skips on details that seem pretty important. (i.e. when her friend is captured by the army guys, she falls asleep and suddenly the guy in their group had retrieved her friend while she was asleep.)
Ultimately I’m going to keep reading to see if the story goes somewhere thematically. After all, any good zombie story maintains a certain social commentary, and I’m hoping she illuminates hers in the story soon.